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Lorath "Zahl" Class Cruiser.

DocTomoe

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1. About the [Zahl]

The Zahl is intended to be used as the backbone of the new LSDF. The Zahl class Cruiser is intended to serve as a warship and patrol vessel which would also serve as a proving ground for new Lorath ship building technology and engineering.

Due to the Zahl being the first dedicated space warship that the Lorath have produced, the mission profile of the Zahl is currently quite vague, thus, the Zahl's assignments range from delivery of precious cargo, to waging full scale assaults at a moment's notice.

2. History and Background

Through the use of cutting edge Lorath designs, and the leap in engineering methods which have been introduced through contact with the YSE, the Lorath have managed to bring their Zahl Cruiser into existence. Prior to the YSE's influence, the Zahl Cruiser was just in its early planning stages, a mere dream made from ink and paper.

After the Misshu assault on Lor, and to uphold the Lorath's agreement that they would defend themselves, the Lorath Self Defense Force has developed the Zahl from the planning stages, to production. This has mainly been accomplished through the use of QnS ship building facilities. Additionally, the QnS documentation that came with these facilities allowed the Lorath to incorporate a number of QnS technological innovations in their cruiser, which range from basic component design, to some entire systems.

Since the destruction of the Taiie system, and the increased Misshu activity surrounding the Southern Nebula, and Lor, the Lorath have decided to focus more of their resources to the restoration of the QnS equipment to construct their cruisers, and allocating more personnel to oversee the construction of these vessels.

3. Dimensions and Crew Compliment

Organizations Using This Vessel:
Lorath Space Militia

Type: Cruiser
Class: Zahl Class Cruiser.
Designer:
Occhesta House
Velor Tomoe Tur'Lista
Manufacturer: Lorath Occhesta House
Production: Limited Production in YE 29, Production estimated to increase by YE 30

In the frame of time within a week of the Taiie system's explosion, the Lorath have only one Zahl class vessel near completion, several additional Zahl class vessels are in production. Large scale production is estimated to take place near the beginning of YE30 when the Yamatai loaned QnS shipyard and building equipment is restored to full operational capacity. Thanks to the mostly automated operation of QnS equipment, the Lorath are able to operate their shipyards and equipment with a skeleton crew, and a group of space trained Helashio workers. Due to the automated features, the Lorath can continue their planetary recovery efforts, while simultaneously bringing their fleet production into full swing.

YE29 Estimated Production: 5 Zahl Class Cruisers.
First Quarter YE30 Estimated Production: 75 Zahl Class Cruisers.
Extended YE30 Projection: 150 Zahl Class Cruisers.

Estimates based upon the usage of a single QnS shipyard, does not account for additional shipyards or construction devices.

Crew: 4 - 12. (6 Would be standard complement, 4 would be the minimum requirement without computer automation.)
Maximum Capacity: 30 (Not counting crew in stasis).
Appearance: The appearance of the vessel as seen from above is of a crescent like shape with an extension that is like that of a neck, that leads to a some what triangular shaped section that houses the bridge of the vessel.

Length: 185 Meters.
Width: 125 Meters. (Without wingtip extensions)
Height: 42 Meters.
Decks: 4.5
Mass: 2,750,600 ~ 2,890,000 kg

4. Performance Statistics

Speed (STL): .80 C / 239 833.9664 kilometer/second. (.9002 If safeties are disabled, engine burnout would result in 3 minutes.)
Speed (Subspace Wave Drive): 1975 C
Speed (Borrowed Fold Drive / (QnS) Hyperspace Fold In Select Ships. Limited Production): 2,350,110c
Speed (Aerial): Mach 3.

Range (Distance): Range is limited by the lifetime of the vessel.
Range (Support): The vessel can travel for a period of eight months without resupply.
Lifespan: Estimated at 25 years without refits.
Refit Cycle: Refits are carried out at the earliest convenience; mandatory refits are carried out every two years.

5. Inside the [Zahl]

Bridge: The Bridge of the Zahl is located in the forward section of the vessel on the second deck. The bridge is shaped in a trapezoid like shape. Two "pitsâ€
 
Wes, is the eatery called a resturant, or a buffet? No, it's a mess hall. You've probably been in one due to you having served on a military base. So you requiring the explination of a Mess hall, is beyond the linguistical scope of dumb.
 
So, essentially, detailing the Lorath ship further so it can be of plotship-grade detail is dumb. Mmmm.

Do I have to say what I think about that or can you guess?
 
Fred...

Fred...

IT. IS. A. MESS. HALL.

Does it really need more of a discription? Does the Sakura's lounge have a detailed description? No it doesn't. You people are trying to keep Nate from getting this ship approved by nitpicking every friggin' thing.
 
This insanity has gone on long enough.

Wes, please make an absolute decision, or I will make one, if you want. This was submitted 01 Sept. and is STILL in the editing process, which is simply too long for any submission.
 
I want:

-the hyperdrive removed, at least until one is obtained in character.
-more details on the interior areas mentioned in Thomas's questions.
-more detailed history and an answer on exactly what, if any, QnS elements were used and a fairly precise timeline on when the ship is or will be built.

This is a nicely detailed ship, but I need the above, especially the last item, for it to make sense to approve this ICly.
 
Negative atmosphere, an atmospheric pressure which is negative to that of the surrounding atmosphere. In other words, air goes in, not out.
That's not negative, that's just less pressure. It's the same with heat (coldness is the absense of heat - vacuum is the absence of pressure). Please chance to "lesser pressure" or something similar to avoid confusion.

Zyro Shield needs to be renamed or just described. A search show it's a rip-off of Master of Orion and shouldn't be included on any new ships (also needs to be eliminated on currently approved ships). This isn't your fault, you were just copying NDI stuff, which unfortunately has a lot of "borrowed" material.

(Damage scale: While the shields are not tied into the engines, they would have an output at a "6" rating, while the shields are tied to the engines, they'd have an output of a "7.5")
I don't buy that. The Sakura's shields are only 7, for instance. If we look at the Damage scale page, we can see the Zahl, a light escort, should be a 5.

Lastly, I'd like to note that only QnS ships actually in the Star Army have PANTHEON computers in them - so no MEGAMI emulator lol.

With these last minor edits, this ship should be good to go. I can do them for you if you'd like.

APPROVED (after edits)
 
Wes said:
Negative atmosphere, an atmospheric pressure which is negative to that of the surrounding atmosphere. In other words, air goes in, not out.
That's not negative, that's just less pressure. It's the same with heat (coldness is the absense of heat - vacuum is the absence of pressure). Please chance to "lesser pressure" or something similar to avoid confusion.

Zyro Shield needs to be renamed or just described. A search show it's a rip-off of Master of Orion and shouldn't be included on any new ships (also needs to be eliminated on currently approved ships). This isn't your fault, you were just copying NDI stuff, which unfortunately has a lot of "borrowed" material.

(Damage scale: While the shields are not tied into the engines, they would have an output at a "6" rating, while the shields are tied to the engines, they'd have an output of a "7.5")
I don't buy that. The Sakura's shields are only 7, for instance. If we look at the Damage scale page, we can see the Zahl, a light escort, should be a 5.

Lastly, I'd like to note that only QnS ships actually in the Star Army have PANTHEON computers in them - so no MEGAMI emulator lol.

With these last minor edits, this ship should be good to go. I can do them for you if you'd like.

APPROVED (after edits)

Give me a moment, I'll get them done.
 
Moved to the approved forum.
 
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