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Approved Character [188604/Independent] Foreman Queen Seven-Two 23-2016-1994

Hum... So I guess this lass was a Type Three during their organic life, but has lost much of their memory of that period now that they are Type Four? Presumably due to the new mechanical body lacking physical memory/being poorly maintained?... Judging by the original name and age, I'm guessing they were originally Nepleslian (or just plain old human), too?...

Sorry for butting in, but Type Fours are normally quite rare!

This is quite well written overall, so I'm here to give it a lore pass preemptively, anyway. Definitely checks all the boxes for both the abilities and woes of a Four. Approval now just depends on if Piney wants a character with such big holes in their past like that. ;I
 
Hum... So I guess this lass was a Type Three during their organic life, but has lost much of their memory of that period now that they are Type Four? Presumably due to the new mechanical body lacking physical memory/being poorly maintained?...

That was the idea yes! Her memory is a bit screwy likely because of a traumatic death/Type four-ification. Then any more memory was probably forced out by new info coming in and a bit of apathy about her past.

This is quite well written overall, so I'm here to give it a lore pass preemptively, anyway. Definitely checks all the boxes for both the abilities and woes of a Four. Approval now just depends on if Piney wants a character with such big holes in their past like that. ;I

Any assistance in giving a bit more backstory and such would be appreciated as well as this is the first character I have popped up for approval here. The freespacer brief looked the most appealing, but there is so much interlaced history I have had trouble keeping it all in mind!
 
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