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F/A-2 'Jackal'

Could you move the article to the proper namespace? Right now it's in the "f" name space, which should not exist.
 
I only got through the first paragraph before I ran out of energy for the night.

- All Titles should be ====== H1 headers ======
- Use complete sentences.
- It's vs Its error fixed.
- Several proper nouns were not linked (corporations and fighters referenced)
- Added unapproved tag
 
The interior section could use some love. Also, the 25mm guns are listed as ADR 4, but existing 35mm guns like the KZ 35mm Type 30 are only ADR 3.
 
- These are two 25mm 'gauss' cannons, not conventional chemical guns. This gives them a much higher muzzle velocity thus increasing damage considerably.

- Added more meat to the cockpit section.
 
Grammar

heavier then that of <-- should be than
rather then a fighter. <-- ditto

2.0 Mach (Max:) Mach 6.5

Convert Mach to either kph or mph, or have both.

digital brain capacity (effectively similar to the SPINE interface).

Spine interface is a series of connections on the back, and how did Parago get the specs for this Since Nekos are limited to Yamatai space.

it's length its vs it's error

Sublight speed too high 435c look at the DR table for armor, you are using a combination of the lightest armor and the heaviest. And trying for a speed that exceeds the limitations.
 
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