Approved Submission Kotoku System

[Bullroarer]

Submission Type: System
Template Used: System
Submission WIP URL:
Submission Destination URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=system:kotoku

Faction:
FM Approved Yet? (Yes/No; Who, When) @Wes
Faction requires art? (Yes/No)

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes/No) No
Contains New art? (Yes/No) No
Previously Submitted? (Yes/No; explain reason if rejected)

Notes: Asked to resubmit my system article, with all the recent changes. Apologies if I am inconveniencing anybody.

Additional related articles:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:npc:duke_glynvalur_starhearth
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=religion:church_of_the_risen_savior

 

[Ametheliana]

Can you go over some of the changes?

Also, there is a settlers red link.

Thanks for doing this!!

 

[Bullroarer]

red link repaired
Changes: removal of "Asteria" and mentions of there within. Minimal rewriting to smooth article. Now a semi-independent colony under Yamatai.

 

[Wes]

FM approved.

 

[Ametheliana]

Approved