This review is for: Liquid Soldier
The submitted article is/has…
[ Ish] A very high level of overall quality
[ Y] A general topic sentence under the title header
[ Y] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)\\
[ Useful] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[ N/A] In the proper format/template
[ N] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[ Mostly] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[ Y] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[ Y] No red and/or broken links
[ Y] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[ Y] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does not…
[ N] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[ N] Obtusely redundant
[ N] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[ Y] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation (
@Primitive Polygon )
[ N] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[ N] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[ N] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[ N] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[ N] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[ Ish] Lacking Detail
[ N] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)
The article has…
[ N/A] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[ Y] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[ Y] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[ N] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.
Summary
Please add a nomenclature.
Is the damage rating for all forms of Liquid Soldier ("worn", fully independent, et cetera) or are there differences?
At a point, I recall being told that "stacking" shields to create a more effective shield was not allowed. I do not know if the same general rule applies to armor, so I would like assistance from other reviewers and staff on this particular issue, please (
@CadetNewb @Ametheliana @Wes @META_mahn ). The section about the Liquid Soldier's damage rating implies the capability to stack armor values.
Status: Pending
Notes
It is a little bit confusing in terms of operation - is the Liquid Soldier supposed to be "worn" on top of a suit, like the picture says, or is it intended to stay as its own entity?
I cleaned up some grammatical and spelling errors sprinkled throughout the article, as well as set a link for the Mindy and Yarvex pages.
I intend to finish this review by: December 31, 2017