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Na-S/S-04a Rook Automated Defense Platform

I'm not sure how much more I can bump this thread without seeming foolish. Any objective review would be nice.
 
15. Do not try to rush the review process. This includes but is not limited to bumping threads and/or harassing the reviewer in chatrooms by spamming the link to your approval thread.
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I'll review this when I have time.
 
This was on my list of things to do actually. ^^;

Armor is toughest at the front and side flanks, but a bit weaker in the platform's rear.
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Wouldn't thickest work instead of toughest?

Do you have on board storage for material for the NCS to utilize?
Na-SC/P-01b Fusion Generator
Three simple fusion generators to provide emergency power for the station.
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How does it get the necessary fuel to run it? Matter Collection System? If so, I don't see it.

I like how the shield, and communications and sensor articles are setup, very nice. :)
 
Well...It looks fine EXCEPT:
  • The Aether Shock Cannon.

On a defense platform? This is overpowered in my opinion. I can understand the requirement for a powerful punch but this is just TOO much. I recommend you go with something a little less powerful.
 
I'm tired of having to review submissions where I end up doing work the creator should have done. For this, I had to fix it's/its errors and had to put in the measurements in feet (<XXX> was left there).

Approved. Don't overproduce the things.
 
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