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Approved Submission Neshaten Kestrire'alis Reconnaissance Class

Kyle

Insane Story Writer Foxy
Inactive Member
Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=faction:neshaten:starships:kestrire_alis_reconnaissance_class
Submission Faction(s)
  1. Neshaten
Submission Terms
  1. I agree
Submission Type: Starship
Template Used: My own
Submission WIP URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?...:starships:kestrire_alis_reconnaissance_class
Submission Destination URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:neshaten:starships:kestrire_alis_reconnaissance_class

Faction: Neshaten
FM Approved Yet? Yup! BY ME! :p
Faction requires art? Nay, but has some :)

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes
Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? Nope

Notes:

Here the unapproved articles, two of which (The gunship and swarm tank) I thought were already approved two years ago but apparently not! >_<

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:neshaten:gi_gin_swarm_tank
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:neshaten:magnetic_accelerator_cannon
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:neshaten:ni_ocon_heavy_gunship

The ammunition for the MAC article is not ready yet, so I will submit those at a later date.
 
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Have YE 40 next to the Nesh date.

In weapons systems, tier is spelled wrong, "Teir"

You put suite's, come's, and area's when no apostrophe is needed.

You need to link to its predecessor ship that failed.

Luxiton engines only account for its STL speeds, how does it achieve FTL?

"The following lists all of the ships systems." (ship's)

Can you properly link its spinal weapon? Right now it reads as, "mark_1_ship_standard"

There is only one mention of the ship's weapon reactor, can you explain it more somewhere?
 
Have YE 40 next to the Nesh date.

Added

In weapons systems, tier is spelled wrong, "Teir"

Fixed

You put suite's, come's, and area's when no apostrophe is needed.

Obliterated

You need to link to its predecessor ship that failed.

I don't see any mention of a predecessor, and even if there was, it would've been something that wasn't on the wiki (I tend to do that, I'll mention previous attempts at ships or weaponry, but there is no article for them, so it's merely fluff and such)

Luxiton engines only account for its STL speeds, how does it achieve FTL?

It's under ship systems:

Faster Than Light
The Kes' has a single Class 1 Kres'tronova Fold Drive for faster than light travel.

"The following lists all of the ships systems." (ship's)

Fixed up

Can you properly link its spinal weapon? Right now it reads as, "mark_1_ship_standard"

I made a change to that weapon, and put the older model in (both the old and new have similar construction specs, so once I've made the actual mark 1 MAC article then I'll change the spinal on this ship to that.

There is only one mention of the ship's weapon reactor, can you explain it more somewhere?

Fixed up, also, fixed the lack of a main reactor being mentioned. This ship does have a few reactors on it (which means that if the ships crew are not very careful, they could create a mini-force of july.)
 
Can you link the fold drive in propulsion, as well, then?

"Ship System's" should not have an apostrophe.
 
For the propulsion I think II did what you asked?

As for the ships system's, yea, I thought I changed that but I guess I didn't >_<
 
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