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[New Race] Phosphorese

Kimura

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Phosphorese

Overview
Home planet: Photoris VII
Often misnamed "Phosphies" as a mildly derogatory nickname by other races, the phosphorese are a colourful bunch of...well, basically, giant sentient furballs. Their fur, however, is far more than just an insulator - they use it for transportation, self-defense, and communication, to name but a few. It isn't exactly suitable for manipulation of objects, but certain techniques have been developed to carry things around. They 'eat' post-neutronium alloys (mostly rare earth metals) and other organisms - mostly plant life that they can crush with their incredible weight and absorb through their fur.

Biological Data
Biological Classification:
  • :arrow: Animalia
    • :arrow: Cnidaria
      • :arrow: Anthozoa
        • :arrow: Actiniaria
          • :arrow: Stichodactylidae
            • :arrow: Heteractis
              • :arrow: Phosphorescis
    Tentacles: 30,000-34,000
    Heads: 1

The Phosphorese evolved from sea-anemony-like creatures which somehow managed to plant themselves on the walls of Neutronium craters; as such, they are very well-adapted to high-radiation situations. They are, however, fairly intelligent (average IQ of 80 with respect to Humans).

The Phosphorese's internal organs consist primarily of a sort of cellular mush. There are three types of cells: the Surface cells, which consist partly of a mix of phosphorescent minerals (ie. barium sulfate, strontium aluminate) but mostly of a chitin-like substance which becomes extremely hard under pressure; the Blood cells, which autonomously transport minerals such as plutonium or iron around the body in an accelerated diffusion process; and the Special cells, which act as a nervous system as well as counteracting the Blood cells when necessary, ie for waste disposal.

Their Surface cells are arranged around a nucleus and in uniform 'hairs' or 'fur' attached to the surface of it. The fur consists of extremely long, hollow cones which harden when the hairs are filled with blood. They are generally approximately 2 microns thick at the tip, 1mm in diameter at the base, and 70-80cm long. At the base of each hair is a gland which regulates bloodflow to and from the hair, so that the individual may consciously straighten any area of hair into razor-sharp, chitin-like, 3/4-meter-long spikes in about 200 milliseconds. Though this is an extremely effective weapon, it only works in self-defense, since it is difficult to aim hair and easy to dodge it if the opponent is in control of his/her momentum.

The fur is also phosphorescent (glows in the dark). Each Phosphorese is a slightly different colour (since the phosphorescent compounds are relatively rare and the Phosphorese are genetically predisposed to reject certain types - kind of like voice tone, hair colour, and eye colour combined), and they communicate by amplitude-modulation of the light waves from their fur. As an unfortunate result, two phosphorese who are very similar in colour (frequency) will have a hard time communicating since they will both reflect each other's waves.

The blood cells are the primary energy-producers; they absorb the radiation given off by decaying rare earth metals, and convert it to ATP for use by the nervous system. The nervous system basically regulates everything, controls voluntary bodily function, and responds to stimuli - especially sensitive to but highly tolerant of external radiation.

It has recently been discovered that the Special cells are actually two different types - the fact that they have very few structural differences has led some to classify them as sub-types - the 'left-brain' cells and the 'right-brain' cells. The left-brain cells have a much more accurate input-output system, but the right-brain cells can handle a lot more throughput of information, albeit with some errors. It has been recorded that all stimuli pass through right-brain cells as a sort of filter, then through left-brain cells for processing, then back through right-brain cells in order to evoke reaction. The fact that these are more populous in the fur when combat-ready accounts for the dramatically increased reaction time but decreased overall intelligence of a Phosphorese under fire.

Childhood
A baby Phosphorese is created when three Phosphorese who like each other very much (and are of complimentary colours; for example, Red, Green, and Violet) attach together and allow bits and pieces of themselves to fall out onto the ground, eventually forming a small combination of the three. Since the three donors experience what is basically pure bliss during the entire twenty-day gestation period, it is very common practice, but they are left drained after and take almost a year to recover so it isn't a constant activity. By the time they are ready to go at it again, their child is generally fully-grown and ready as well.

The average lifespan is about ten years, but this is more of a half-life than an actual figure, since Phosphorese death is pretty random. Some elders of 100+ years are still alive and just as youthful as their great-great-great-great-great-great-great grandchildren, though tend to be a little more knowledgeable.

In the year of infancy, a Phosphorese will spend most of its time learning to consciously and subconsciously operate the various parts of its body, learning to speak by the advanced morse-code-like language, and consuming minerals to make its colour the most vivid in the tribe.

Economy
Since the Phosphorese need very little in the way of sustenance (one glob of neutronium each will last them for ten years even if they reproduce as often as they can, and the rest of their nutrients they pick up by spiking the ground or rolling around on it), and they don't have much in the way of luxury goods, there is very little in the way of trading that goes on.

Religion, Mythology, etc.
The Phosphorese believe in one creator and respect it very much. They don't, however, worship it, since they also believe it is no longer around or no longer has any power over their world - they generally don't care which. The name rarely comes up, except in the expression "Oh, god" or "Thank god", which are frequently said during reproduction and at scientific epiphanies.

Society
The Phosphorese have a tribal community, by which large numbers of them stay together, migrate together, and share a lot of things in common. Status in the society is mostly based on the number of children, thus indirectly, age, though other merits may improve one's status. Naming is generally a colour (sometimes with modulation) followed by the clan name, for example "Scarlet of the Skybound" or "Redlin of the Healites" (though this is just translation). The tribes tend to be named by their main scientific exploits and goals; some tribes specialize in healing, others in astrophysics, and some even in warfare - these latter ones are generally stationed near the north-south continental border.

Art for the Phosphorese is a single profession; since the use of colour is also the use of words, the effective shaping of it becomes a veritable feat that very few can hope to achieve even once in a lifetime, though many elders are known to have produced as many as three, or even in rare cases, five. Generally, a particular work would represent an epiphany that a certain individual has had. Abstract sculptures of phosphorescent, metallic, and even just colourful shapes litter the entire northern continent, and some Phosphorese have taken it upon themselves to see every single one.
 
Neat race, but not approved because of the Neutronium part. Neutronium is the stuff inside a neutron star and thus isn't found laying around on planets.
 
Um...Being an Invetebrate Zoology student I have MANY problems with this race. I will give a further run down tomarrow as that right now I am short on time.

I agree with Wes...

NOT Approved
 
You gotta read about the planet, first. (Strangely enough, both those links come up as 'visited' already ;) )

Also, you may very well disagree with the biological classification - that's because I kind of copied it from sea anemonies and these are nothing like them ^.^' but feel free to bring out the heavy guns.
 
Giant, intelligent, lethal tribbles. These sound like a very interesting, if somewhat unusable (for a character) race... would be interesting to discover them though.
 
Ok, Firstly I want to say:

I respect your attempt to design a race. It is hard work.

Anyway:

Arrow Animalia
Arrow Cnidaria
Arrow Anthozoa
Arrow Actiniaria
Arrow Stichodactylidae
Arrow Heteractis
Arrow Phosphorescis


Tentacles: 30,000-34,000
Heads: 1

Lets start with your classification:

Kingdom: Anamalia
No problems there.

Phylum: Cnidaria
Ok lets look at the requirements to be considered apart of this phylum: (As per the intepretation of Ruppert, Fox, and Barns in their 7th Edition of Invetebrate Zoology // and the Tabular Key to Marine Invetebrates by Leland W. Pollock)

Requirement #1: One true organ(yes they have many pseudo organs), The Gonad

The Phosphorese's internal organs are surprisingly similar to a Yamatai mammal - it has a discernible kidney, stomach, brain, liver, heart, and large intestine. Certain noteworthy things it lacks are lungs, a small intestine, and a spine. It has a few unusual organs, though - a high-tensile-strength protein 'bag' contains and keeps Neutronium from decomposing, for later use as energy and nutrition. A second organ, connected to this, takes small quantities of neutronium at a time and allows them to gradually degenerate, absorbing the energy created in this process.

This requirement for the one true organ being the gonad is one of the main reasons for the classification of Cnidarians. Therefore something with the traits you suggested would hardly be a Cnidarian.

I am not suggesting however that the organism could not have evolved from Cnidarians. The current theory suggests that Cnidarians gave rise to two other phylas; The Annalids and the Ctenophora. Neither of which match your biological description even remotely.

It looks to me like you picked the things you liked out of a lot of phylums and made an organism out of it. Unfortunately I dont see how an organism like you describe could have evolved out of Cnidaria. Other than the polyp body shape I dont see ANY simularities.

Requirement #2: No Brain

The ganglion in a cnidarian are not centralized. Once again this is a defining requirment to classify something as a cnidarian.

There are other requirements but there is no sense.


Anyway, here is my point. If you are going to classify something in the existing classification system. IT has to fit the requirements of the phylum its going into. I can forward you to several invetebrate manuals, keys and other things to help you classify your species accordingly or make up your own if you like.

One thing I want to point out is that yes, this is a roleplaying site, and its also science fiction. I believe however its important to design species that make sense not only biologically but in terms of evolutionary history as well.

Anyway either make your own phylum, or find one that fits the basic desgin of your species.

Wes, pointed out to you as well about the problem with their nutritional requirements and the neutronium. I agree with him, it is a far fetched idea for an organism to survive in such a manner. Not to mention I'd love to see an explination regarding the species metabolism on the cellular level that would allow it to do so.


If you are interested in speaking to me further on this design or other ideas you have feel free to. Try to understand I am not knocking your creativity but the reasoning behind it. If you want to design a cool cnidarian species I suggest you stay within the realms of the phylum, which leaves a lot of room for some cool aliens. [/b]
 
No, you're totally right - I did kind of throw some properties together, and was pretty vague about the evolutionary chain. I do, though, want it to fit properly into a real(istic) setting...so if inside them was some kind of primordial mush, which fulfilled the purpose of nervous system, nutrition management, and circulation, would that make it more readily introduceable into the Cnidarians? I found Google's results as well as the Wikipedia to be sadly lacking in this area (compared to, say, a textbook), and as such I had trouble classifying them properly - but I suppose I could just make up a classification, like you said, since they are kind of unearthly...

As to the neutronium part, I'd really like an explanation, regardless of how silly, of Zesuaium, because I think that'd really help in figuring out how the inhabitants of this Neutronium-ridden planet could have managed to harness it. Then again, it seems that Zesuaium is, at this point, still not properly explained, so that would leave me a bit of leeway for creativity, ne? ;)

In any case, those manuals, keys, and other things would be super great :) In fact, it'd be neat if other people would use them as well, since the percentage of humanoid species on earth is very small and we can probably assume that this generalization can apply to the galaxy as well ;)
 
Wheras Zesuaium is a fictional material, Neutronium is a real one, in real science, and thus can not be used any way you like.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Neutronium

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Degenerate_matter

The term neutronium has been popular in science fiction since at least the middle of the 20th century. It typically refers to an extremely dense, incredibly strong form of matter. While presumably inspired by the concept of neutron-degenerate matter in the cores of neutron stars, the material used in fiction bears at most only a superficial resemblance (usually depicted as an extremely strong solid under Earthlike conditions, while all proposed forms of neutron star core material are fluids and are extremely unstable at pressures lower than that found in stellar cores).
 
Yes, I'm well aware of that - I simply thought that if Zesuaium is a material that can be produced - and is virtually indestructable - then it might offer a viable containment method for Neutronium, which would require an extremely high-tensile-strength container that would keep alpha particles and spare neutrons from passing through it. Zesuaium seems to fulfill all these requirements - the problem that needs explaining is the production of it in an organism, which first requires an explanation of the production of it in the first place..
 
Just call it something else than Neutronium. It's overdone.

It's one of my pet peeves currently, due to it being used in an enormous number of sci-fi things, and the truth being it's an extremely unstable liquid! And by unstable, that doesn't mean radiactive, that means it'll fall apart almost instantly. Worse, the weight in neutronium is ridiculous. One spoonfull has the same weight as a mountain. So even a small amount will rip straight through an organism. It's really not suitable for use in an organism, and we should rethink its use in Tech-RP, due to its liquid and unstable state.
 
All the particles in a system of degenerate matter exert an extreme force of repulsion on each other, since they're so densely packed (this accounts for its expected liquid properties). As a result, uncontained Neutronium should tend to balance itself by ejecting huge amounts of:
  • -Protons (Hydrogen ions)
    -Neutrons (ie, used in fission reactors)
    -Electrons (Beta particles - a common type of radioactivity)
    -Diprotons (Helium nuclei; alpha particles - another common type of radoactivity)
    -Energy (in the form of electromagnetic radiation - some of which are bound to be in the Gamma ray spectrum, a third common form of radioactivity)
...regardless of the amount; basically, it's radioactive in every way and then some. So, even a bit of neutronium small enough to fit inside a single cell - assuming that this cell was able to contain it (for example, if this cell was made out of Zesuaium) - would contain enough energy to fuel an organism for quite some time, without being so extremely heavy as to rip it to shreds.

Then again, Neutronium in planetary conditions would no longer be at this extreme density - as you say, Neutronium would 'fall apart almost instantly', but in a system with some gravity and solid ground, isn't it possible that some pockets of extremely dense matter could remain? Nowhere near as dense as actual Neutron Star matter, but enough that it's still radioactive (not decaying QUITE so fast), and very heavy.

Nobody really agrees on what exactly 'Neutronium' entails, but most agree that it refers to a form of degenerate matter; of course neutron star material will fail to exist outside a neutron star, but it must have some intermediate step between it and chunks of the elements we're familiar with, ne?
 
First off you can't use zuesium as a basis or referance or anything like that. The material can't possibly exist under the current laws of physics but has only been kept because for ‘continuation of storyline'

Yes, it is likely that neutronium could exist on a planet but it is unlikely that you will be able to harness large quantities of it, at least in the way you want to use it, because it will likely be in the form of single particles. Finding large deposits of the element isn't completely inappeasable but I doubt you'd find enough deposits for the amount of the element that you want.
 
EDIT: Emphasizing that I added a link to the 'home planet' post at the top, since I'm getting suspicious that some of you aren't reading it before commenting.

Uso Tasuki said:
Describe a significant setback, challenge or opportunity in your life and the impact it has had on you.
When I was in elementary school, I got picked on a lot because I was really whiney and cried a lot (easily). When I realized this was mostly my fault (this took a while), I tried to start whining less and stopped crying for silly things. I think I'm mostly desensitized to pretty much everything now...well, I haven't cried since junior high and I definitely don't whine as much as I used to (except about grammar - GRAMMATIK MACHT FREI).

Uso Tasuki said:
The material can't possibly exist under the current laws of physics
Says who? It seems an awful lot like strange matter, except without the mini-black-hole-like properties;
Wikipedia said:
There has also been some evidence that quark matter may have been produced in particle accelerators at CERN in 2000.
Why can't such matter exist in a sci-fi setting?

Uso Tasuki said:
it is unlikely that you will be able to harness large quantities of it
It's unlikely that Earth has an atmosphere which stays mostly between the melting and boiling point of water, too. But, if it didn't, we wouldn't be here to observe it. I must redirect you to the Photoris VII post (see very top) because it sounds more feasible there - or at least, that'd be the appropriate place to debate whether or not neutronium could exist on a planet.

I appreciate all of the feedback so far. I guess it did kind of turn into a debate, which I was kind of hoping against, but then again it was kind of going out on a limb and I suppose a verdict will be reached eventually. I also appreciate that nobody's been like "omgnothasstupid"; people used to do that and then I would cry.
 
Ok, that first bit was unintentional. I was editing my post in the same file that I was writing my scholarship Essay in and the essay question got copied along with it.

Zeusium and strange matter have some vaguely similar properties but in how they act they are completely different. Zeusium retains its strength without the aid of high gravity or a high energy state and can be held in a normal persons hand plus only needs to be one layer of molecules thick to retain all of its strength (which no possible molecular structure is capable of). It doesn't bend, doesn't break, has a molecular structure, doesn't allow energy to pass through it is non-reactive to chemicals, can be made transparent ect, ect. Some of these properties are realalistic but not all of them at once. You can debate the material to death but that has already been done and the conclusion was that the material simply shouldn't be able to exist in the real world even under suspension of disbelief but I'm not going to go any more into that.

Neutronium, if it did exist on a planet in large quantities, would likely get bonded to spare protons and electrons to get converted into hydrogen OR slam itself into some unsuspecting particle and create one of those higher than normal atomic mass particles (I forget what they are called). Even considering the more unlikely circumstances of a planet being near a neutron star that exploded and showered it with high amounts of neutronium it is doubtful that the neutronium would remain around long enough to be apart of anything on the planet that is alive.
 
I think the word you're looking for is Isotopes - which applies to lighter-than-normal atoms, as well....and yes, it probably would do a lot of that - which would mean that these atoms would become radioactive - which is basically a minor corollary to what I've already said. You're right, though - I am asking to "suspend your disbelief" in relation to how quickly this decay takes place; it IS probably a lot faster than I've said, but we really have no way of guaranteeing that, except by consulting a head researcher in the field.

And yes, Zesuaium does stretch the imagination significantly in terms of ordinary chemistry, but if one were to think of, for example, atomic-particle polymers..? Long strands of nucleons held together by weak or strong nuclear forces...it may be ridiculous and totally off-kilter, but it's a start.
 
Kimura said:
And yes, Zesuaium does stretch the imagination significantly in terms of ordinary chemistry, but if one were to think of, for example, atomic-particle polymers..? Long strands of nucleons held together by weak or strong nuclear forces...it may be ridiculous and totally off-kilter, but it's a start.

Puts me to mind of scrith, the material that absorbs 40% of neutrinos that pass through it, and has a tensile strangth of the strong nuclear force. Wee.

I like your idea of a "subatomic polymer." The only thing that makes me hesitate is that if such a thing is possible, why dosen't it already occur in nature(Since the strong and weak nuclear forces only exist in the nuclei of atoms, not between them)?

As for the vritters, I like them. I do think their food storage and comsumption is rather unique. Maybe they just ingest bits of uranium and use the radiation to heat themselves.... tiny, sentient fission reactors... awesome..
 
ya...isotopes.

Think of it this way, neutronium isn't 100% nessisary for what you want so just put in something less out there.

The reason a 'subatomic polymer' made up of thousands of protons or whatever dosen't exsist is because it would be element 10^1000 power on the periodic table. Technically it should decay almost instantly into something a little smaller.
 
Okay, I decided to back down on the Neutronium and suddenly realized that the data sheet needed a major overhaul. Since I've only got an hour for lunch, it's gotten a medium-sized one instead: neutronium is replaced with its assumed planetary equivalent, the biology has been rewritten to be somewhat more cnidarian-like (though probably the correct classification now ends right after instead of right before, if that), and an extra paragraph was added to Culture. Hopefully this will satisfy - to a point - both of the concerns raised so far. If they still stand, please continue to assert them, and if new ones crop up, I DON'T WANT TO HEAR ABOUT THEM I mean please post those too.
 
Well I'm sure if anything is weird I'll hear a summery of tom then drag myself back to this thread to make some half baked yet quasi-intelligent comment.
 
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