Approved Submission [Origin/Yamatai] Origin Blade Works

[Immortal Cyan]

Submission Type: Weapon/Subsidiary
Template Used: N/A
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:origin:blade_works
Faction: Origin and Yamatai
FM Approved Yet? No, @CadetNewb and @Wes
Faction requires art? No

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? No

Notes: This is somewhat of an update/revision to the general melee weapon article. This will offer player characters and large organizations a service from where they can order custom made melee weapons.

 

[Wes]

Sounds OK to me.

 

[META_mahn]

Grr. I'll fix the grammar in the pile driver tomorrow.

 

[club24]

@META_mahn don't worry about the article or the pile driver for now, I'll be going through it all later as the blade works is more or less non canon for the time being, the whole thing needs retrofitting to be a Horizon division

 

[club24]

ok so after discussing with @Kai on discord, we decided to have the blade works transferred back to origin, its a lot of work for me to hold onto it and as much as i appreciated the gesture to hand it to me I'd rather not be responsible for not giving something back when the owner came back.

so unless anyone else objects I'd like to hand it back to him and origin as it will do a better job where it was meant to be than what i can do with it

 

[Wes]

Okay, that's fine with me.

 

[IQ]

Best that I take my simple upgrade back to @Kai again in a different thread?

 

[club24]

i've restored the page, not that much had been changed, but i cant change its namespace for some reason @Wes

 

[Wes]

Moved to https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:origin:blade_works

 

[club24]

Awesome, then its back in the right place, all yours @Kai

 

[Ametheliana]

compensate, else the (Add "or)

to cause massive amounts of armour piercing damage (bombastic language)

At which the gears will immediately begin recharching, taking a solid ten seconds before it can be reused. (Not a complete sentence)

polearm gets it's charge. (its not it's)

Before pistons push these gears down and jut the tip forward at massive velocity, causing an explosive kick the user is forced to compensate... (This sentence needs re-working.)

To minimise the strain and reduce the massive maintenance this upgrade requires. (not a complete sentence)

@IQ