Approved Submission [Ottyo] Knightly Orders of Prydainia

[CadetNewb]

Submission Type: Culture
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Submission Destination URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=:faction:principality_of_prydainia:knightly_orders

Faction:
FM Approved Yet: Yes
Faction requires art: No

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles: No
Contains New art: No
Previously Submitted: No

Notes:

This article gives general information on a selection of knightly orders within the principality regarding their activities, disposition and fighting styles. Over time, more will likely be added.

 

[ArsenicJohn]

Is this being looked at?

 

[Arbitrated]

I'll take this one~

 

[Arbitrated]

Alright, taking a look through, it's a well-written article with little to hold up approval. However, there is something significant I would like to bring attention to before I can approve this:


For the "Camlann Crusaders", I would like an article or something for the stealth system they use. While their tech is described as custom-built, if (almost if not) all of it has similar stealth capabilities then they do have some sort of basic template or benchmark to build things off of.

 

[CadetNewb]

The group likely uses the Combined Stealth System, or an improved version of it if that helps.

 

[Arbitrated]

I suggest just linking to that then if you can, and that'll be a pretty straightforward way to explain it ^^

 

[CadetNewb]

I've went ahead and made the change - how's it look @Arbitrated ?

 

[Arbitrated]

Seems good, I say this is APPROVED now. I'll transfer the thread over in about an hour in case anybody has notable objections, et cetera.