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Approved Submission Reservoir System

Bullroarer

Bullroarer

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It was my fault for making an assumption here, but this is for a new faction on the site? I need to be certain, because if that's the case, we'll have to go about this in a completely different manner.
 
Well I initially made vice years ago @CadetNewb.

It was always intended to be an NPC for/setting area. The planet it self has been used in RP several times as a kind of back ground group.

They are a trade port and probably purchase things from corporations in the region, as well as export food and minerals to justify their economy.

Essentially it’s 1920’s America.
 
Ira said:
Well I initially made vice years ago @CadetNewb.

It was always intended to be an NPC for/setting area. The planet it self has been used in RP several times as a kind of back ground group.

They are a trade port and probably purchase things from corporations in the region, as well as export food and minerals to justify their economy.

Essentially it’s 1920’s America.
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So it's a NPC Faction?
 
That being said, if bullroarer desires to take Vice further. I won’t object man’s will even help. But it only works if he can get articles approved.

Plus the reservoir system has been needed and he made it. Has my blessing.
 
FrostJaeger said:
Not at the moment, no - but others (perhaps even myself) could potentially use it as an enemy faction or an opponent in a plot. I also fail to see how my usage (or lack thereof) is related to whether something is considered a non-player faction...
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That’s fine that you fail. However I was merely curious because you showed an interest, and I was wondering if you wanted more information on vice.

That being said, if something that is non-player wants to go further. It can. Bullroarer has taken an interest in Vice and so he has priority as far as I am concerned.
 
I was hoping for something that was succinct and to the point, but you went above and beyond what was needed. You should be proud of this, but, there's still a few things we need to fix up before we're done. They shouldn't be too hard though I think.
  • Since it was explained in the article itself who Dantarius was, he doesn't need a separate article anymore. Go ahead and clear that out since we want to avoid having stub articles.
  • The article for The Crown is also a stub, so you'll have to remove that too; you only need to define it in a sentence or two here in the article itself as the monarchical ruling body.
  • The same can be said of The Throne being a stub; I suggest putting that into the Vice article as a location, and using that as a vehicle to talk about The Throne briefly and subtly.
  • Remove the Dante quotes; in this setting, Earth is just a story told to kids to put them to sleep. We typically discourage something like this on the wiki, but if you want to keep them, I'll have to ask around. Go ahead and let me know what you prefer.
 
Ok, just a few things left I'm hoping.
  • Change the Latin quotes to English, or have their English translations in note form using (( and ))
  • The Vice article itself still has The Crown stub article; rather than having a stub, just define it within the article itself as the ruling body
  • The same goes for The Throne - since it's a stub article, it's better to have it integrated as text within the current Vice article. I would suggest having it be a sub-section under whichever city it is located in
If you have any questions or are unsure what I mean, please let me know, and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.
 
Alright, I'm close to marking this page as approved, however, there's still some things that haven't been dealt with yet.
  • You need to delete this page on The Crown, and fix the red links it will create, now that its information is integrated into the articles, and the page isn't needed anymore. You can check what pages a page is linked to by clicking on the thing that says 'Backlinks' under the edit button on the right hand side.
  • When finally approved, you'll need a better address name for The Great Houses page, probably something like faction:independent:great_houses_of_reservoir You can change the name of a page by clicking the thing that looks like a paint roller and labeled "Rename Page".
 
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