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Approved Character Security boi

well he checks out by my standards, in future I'd recommend including a [Horizon] in the thread title to show which plot the character is relevant to but regardless he is

APPROVED
Although I am not sure if the SAINT involvement in the history requires any further evaluation by someone other than myself
 
Character histories usually don't have redacted information and those that do were told to get rid of the redacted info and just didn't, that's why you'll see it on the wiki here and there.

"As it turned out, he was deep undercover investigating rumours of █████████ Onboard the YSS █████████. He had been held captive and supposedly died during the hours upon hours of torture..." This happened on a Star Army vessel? That doesn't sit right and if that is the case, @Wes will need to sign off on it. It sounds like he was tortured by crew of SAoY? This needs to be explained.
 
would this "As it turned out, he was deep undercover investigating rumours of military grade weapons being illegally sold Onboard the civilian mining vessel █████████. The ship was ambushed, he had been held captive and supposedly died during the hours upon hours of torture..." be any better?
@Ametheliana
 
if i may make a suggestion which I think i spoke to you briefly on discord about earlier about, you don't neccisarily have to redact the name of said vessel and can simply list it as "onboard a civilian mining vessel" this will also clear up any issues with said vessel not having a name or wiki canon behind it ^^
 
Made the change to "As it turned out, he was deep undercover investigating rumours of military grade weapons being illegally sold onboard a civillian mining vessel. The ship was ambushed, he had been held captive and supposedly died during the hours upon hours of torture" that we spoke about @Ametheliana
 
All good.

You also link to investigator, which is separate from SAINT. Can you change the word and link investigator to, "operative"?
 
Added a cybernetic arm to his character sheet, I felt as if it would be okay considering I have not done anything with him yet but please let me know if there are any issues with this.
 
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