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Seraph - S18

Zakalwe

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Seraph - S18

This is the newest breed of Seraph, bred not for war but to form a new working force for Elysia, one skilled enough to do fairly advanced tasks, capable, and most importantly to work without pay or consideration for oneself. It is on the back of these that Elysia hopes to have an economic revival, to bring back the days of glory currently lost to it.

The S18 stands six foot six inches tall and is in all appearance is a rather dumpy looking humanoid, with pale, almost white, rubbery skin. Their flesh is far less gooey than in earlier models, due to their need to handle delicate components that might be damaged in contact with ‘goo'. The head of the S18 features a crown of eight small black slit-like eyes, space roughly equally around the head providing it with 360 degree vision. Its mouth is large like in earlier models, and filled with similar sharp teeth, which it has a tendency to bare in a fairly horrific grin.

Two S18's may be somewhat different because they have been created for a different purpose, in that they are made for a different task. One designed to work in a mine may well have echolocation to help it through the tunnels, ones designed to work in small spaces may only be three foot tall etc. The diversity of the S18's is enormous. The S18 has a genetic structure that is rather easy to modify to create newer, more specialised, versions.

However among two S18 designed for the same purpose there is effectively no way to tell among two of them. S18's do not have any specialised sensory organs other than their eyes (unless equipped with them to suit their purpose), instead tasting, feeling and hearing through their skin. Their tactile sense is especially developed, capable of detecting extremely fine details about something they touch.

S18's are able to create tendrils out of their flesh, and use these to pick up and manipulate objects, which they do with an extraordinary degree of finesse, aided in this my exceptional hand-tendril co-ordination and their 360 degree vision. These tendrils have somewhat lower strength than that of a human but greater manipulative abilities. An S18 can produce up to six at any one time. Designed for menial labour as well as finesse an S18 is capable to pick up one ton with either their main arms, the actuall strength coming from their torso, or two if they are using both, and to carry this with a fair amount of ease. This is in order for them to be able to do heavy duty lifting. Their hands are equipped with five long and somewhat delicate fingers, capable of above standard manipulation skills, and also possessing a vice-like grip. Their flesh is highly damage resistant, although not so much as the S12's or S17's is.

S18's have the capability to 'bub', another S18 effectively growing out of its body, sharing an identical genetic code. In this way the Elysians have a simple way to increase the size of their work force quickly. This budding takes around a week, and happens whenever an S18 is ordered to bud.

The mind of a S18 is both very complicated and very simple. It is very complicated in the way it can handle very complex tasks, and carry them out perfectly. It has an eidetic memory and a highly developed video-spatial ability which makes it very good at construction work. Once given a task it can watch an adept perform it, have some relevant information downloaded in to its brain, and it will be able to carry out that task with skill to rival a skilled worker. With its superior manipulation abilities, strength and speed, along with greater senses, it can often out-do them as well.

However the mind is very simple in that it never questions its orders, and has very little sense of individuality. It is, to all sense and purposes, a drone. They are completely obedient to the Arch-angel's, and will only take orders from them, or those that they have been ordered to take order from by the Arch-angels. They have no imagination what so ever, never get bored, or think about the future outside the tasks they are given. So they are pretty much the perfect worker, as long as you don't want innovation.

S18 can communicate vocally, although they only do so very rarely and only in response to direct questions, at which time they speak in a deep watery voice. Normally they co-ordinate with each other and with their masters using telepathy, usually no more than a quick description of position, and status.

Sekiko, if you have a problem with this, please tell me and I'm sure we can work it out.
 
It's overpowered. There's no reason for a worker drone to be "powerful" telepathically (every other new race seems to be "powerful" psionically anyway, to my disgust), and the strength level is way too high for the temporary arms (if it is humanoid, why not use its regular arm as main lifters and the temprarily ones for fine adjustments?). Lifting strength comes from the torso and legs, anyway.

Besides the above, it's filled with a disturbing number of "AWESOME" adjectives (amazing, extremely, highly,very adept).

I also think you should add the ability to rapidly reproduce by budding, so they're widely available without the need for a lot of factories to make them.

Lastly, don't take all of the Plebians's jobs. ^_^;
 
Alright, I've made many of the adjustments you requested.

They are no longer highly telepathic.
I've made it clearer that I actually meant for their 'normal' arms to have that strength.
I've removed as many of the 'awesome' synonyms I could find.
I've added budding.

And the Plebians can still be inventive and do office work :) Anything requiring an imagination will still have to be done by a Plebian.
 
I was thinking more rapidly than a week, but that's okay.

Approved!
 
Note that only the first bump counts for event purposes.
 
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