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Approved Submission Seven Deadly Virtues

Bullroarer

Inactive Member
Submission Type:Corporation
Template Used: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=templates:business
Submission WIP URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:corp:seven_deadly_virtues
Submission Destination URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=:corp:seven_deadly_virtues

Faction: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=nepleslia:black_syndicate
FM Approved Yet? (Yes/Soresu on 11/6/2017)
Faction requires art? (Yes/No)

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes/No)
Contains New art? (Yes/No)
Previously Submitted? (Yes/No; explain reason if rejected)

Notes:
 
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I couldn't find Vice's Solar System on the map so I couldn't tell you if it was Independent, Nepleslian or Yamataian controlled. As for the Syndicate, all I can say is I'm happy to see a fellow Underworlder coming to the scene. I've got no issue with it to be perfectly honest. ^.^

EDIT: Although looking at Jimmy's page, I'd probably suggest that you try to do something with the coding for the Character Description section so it isn't all bunched up.
 
Sorry I am just getting to this. My only question is how the Black Syndicate play a role in the 7DV. I think the article looks nice otherwise.
 
Please describe the logo with prose, put text underneath the products headers and describe products more. Thank you.
 
Please do not use third person language (you, your, we, etc)
Examples:
Come sell us your stuff. We will make an offer on anything, typically below market value.
We will loan anybody money, regardless of credit history, at a competitive interest rate.
For a small monthly fee, we will store anything. From a small deposit box to a star ship.
Rank in the family determine what job you perform within the company.

Please fill out all of the text underneath the different products and services headers. One sentence is not enough. Thank you.
 
You link to loans, purchase, and merchandise, but only merchandise in something I can approve as the other two have no info and are unnecessary at this time to have as their own wiki articles.
 
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