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SKCS Itano

Zack

Zack

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Submission Type: One off starship for an NPC faction
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=starship:skcsitano

Faction: USO
FM Approved Yet? Yes
Faction requires art? Yes

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? No
Notes: Working on filling out some stuff for NPC factions that have been showing up in 188604. This is basically a stub article but it should be decently filled out enough.

[Moderator Edit]: This thread was abandoned and this one took its place:
https://stararmy.com/roleplay-forum/index.php?threads/skcs-itano.59957/
 
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I renamed to wip namespace

This looks like a good article what are you talking about with this "stub" stuff?
 
Mainly due to the stubbyness of the article. If this was for a PC ship I would expect far more fleshed out internal and system articles.
 
Having looked over this submission, I have multiple concerns - mostly minor ones, but a few major ones as well - regarding it.
  • According to this section of the Damage Rating article, "[t]he potency of a barrier always is on the same tier as the unit fielding it..." - meaning that this section needs to be corrected.
  • Where are the descriptions for the rest of the compartments inside the ship? (Kitchens, airlocks, laundry rooms, crew quarters, mess halls, etc.)
  • Where's the approved wiki article for Keller Dietrich?
  • Where are the approved wiki articles for the "off the shelf electronics" mentioned in Computers and Electronics?
  • Where are the approved wiki articles for the environmental systems mentioned in Life Support Systems?
  • What's an "Areospike configuration"?
  • Where's a description of this starship's FTL drive?
  • Where are the approved wiki articles for the "cold fusion reactors" mentioned in Power?
  • Where are the approved wiki articles for the "electrostatic shields" mentioned in Shield Systems?
  • According to the Starship Template, new weapon systems must be submitted separately, @Zack.
  • Shouldn't this submission have a nomenclature listed somewhere?
  • How many missiles can this starship fire simultaneously?
  • Where is the approved wiki article for the "small shuttle" mentioned in Shuttles?
 
There's hostility in the mere posting of your "problems."

There's also a perception that you post against the submissions of some people, but not others where there could be clear problems. Such as this one.

And, most importantly, you take to the hilt the authority granted to nonstaff on this site. And you do so with airs that aren't at all required or helpful.

Zack's "just ignore him" approach is hardly useful. Nor should people acquiesce to you.

The best move for you is to approach from a position of assistance and not resistance. And if things don't go your way or get taken up, you generally should let them go.
 
Bullet and list additional Key Features, if not only one.

I won't tell you again that armor and shield tier must be the same, silly. omg.

What the heck is "Areospike configuration"?

You know that these weapons need articles, right?

Put in OOC Notes on who made it and then when it's approved, link to this thread in the OOC Notes.
 
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