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Approved Submission Star Army Cabin

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Submission Type: Mundane building
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=stararmy:buildings:cabin_type_39

Faction: Yamatai
FM Approved Yet? Approved by me yesterday.
Faction requires art? Yes

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? No

Notes: Running it through here to look for feedback and suggestions.
 
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My suggestion would be to either put a price on the article or have a store somewhere that can sell them and has a price. I know they're not really meant to be sold, but that would actually give us a housing price to compare to in the setting.
 
Seems neat. I could really imagine one of these being used for woodland training sessions, or as a guard's quarters posted near an airfield/spaceport.

Perhaps the only thing I can see wrong (and as an artist, I know this is a big ask), is that there isn't a more Japanese-styled variant? You know, with paper sliding doors and stuff?

The idea of faction-specific prefab houses is still an intriguing one in general.
 
I like it too!

Can we look forward to seeing the selection of cabin eventually expanded? This is a very european build, whereas some soldier might also enjoy more Earth-oriental style of housing (like those cool japanese houses anime protagonists tend to end up into).
 
I got the image from a stock website so the style they had is the style I used. I actually really like the art though. I think the idea of having a couple more design flavors available is a good one but coming up with more art is a time/money investment we will need to consider the worth of.
 
Comparing the image to the layout makes me feel like it would be a bit cramped inside, but that wouldn't be so bad if it was an intended feature.

My grandparents' farmhouse was like that because it was built over two hundred years ago, for people around five feet tall, and that's how big nearly everyone who'd be receiving these cabins is. Would it be fun to say they're built that way, as a rule, so that others might have a reason to grouse a little when using a standard one?

I like the idea of combining Dutch colonial housing with discreet futuristic technology.
 
I added some dimensions (these are my best guess) and additional information about the second floor. Added price. Added fireplace info.
 
If this needs approval, you've got it.

Otherwise, I like it very much!
 
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