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Approved Submission U2AAM

Zack

Inactive Member
Submission Type: Airlock Pod Transport Thing
Template Used: Vehicle
Submission WIP URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:uso:u2aam
Submission Destination URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:uso:u2aam

Faction: Uso
FM Approved Yet? Yes
Faction requires art? Yes

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes : Also need approval here: wip:character:wazu:wz-4000
Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? No

Notes: Very hastily done writeup for a boarding pod thing for S6.
 
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Out of curiosity, what kind of "directed explosives" does the breaching module use - "conventional," fusion, plasma, anti-matter, etc. - and what tier are they? I ask because I'll probably be making boarding pods for Elysia in the future - and because with the way the article's currently worded, the aforementioned "directed explosives" are capable of instantaneously cutting through any amount of armor, regardless of said armor's composition and/or tier.

Might I suggest replacing the "directed explosives" with, say, tier 9 plasma torches? Give them a "range" of two or three meters, fuel them with tanks strapped on to the outside of the boarding pod, then bolt their nozzles onto the front of the pod - and with enough time you'd be capable of breaching (virtually) anything.
 
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Change this to be in line with this, please.

The craft is designed to be remotely operated either by the soldiers inside or by a remote system. " (This needs a little more description of the computer/control system.)

Good job!
 
Change made,

and the operator bit has been changed to:

The craft is designed to be remotely operated either by the soldiers inside using a datapad along with a basic piloting app, or by a remote operator using the control application.

I'm trying not to explain it too much, there really isn't too much to say there other than there isn't a joystick anywhere, just use your ifad / datajockey / etc.
 
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