Approved Submission Wz-W4000 Launcher

[Zack]

Submission Type: Launcher
Template Used: Weapon
Submission WIP URL:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:corp:wazu:wz-w4000
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:wazu:volumetricsights#operation_modes
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:wazu:40mmsuperrounds
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:40mmsuperfrag

Submission Destination URL:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:wazu:wz-w4000
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:wazu:volumetricsights#operation_modes
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:wazu:40mmsuperrounds
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:40mmsuperfrag

Faction: USO
FM Approved Yet? Yes / Me
Faction requires art? Yes

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes
Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? No

Notes: This is the start of the write up for the grenade launcher / drone launcher that Vier used in the ice-breaker thread. There is a lot more that needs to be added, more ammunition types, perhaps a few articles on the sub-items like the recoil absorbing/folding stock and the fire select... but those can always be done later. Right now I'm just trying to get the basics approved. Later on I'll be adding to this with more sub-articles.

 

[Ametheliana]

For the main weapon page, Ammunition and Optics need prose/text, not just links.

The volumetric sight's images don't seem to coincide with the descriptions (red dot; red dot, dissuasion mode; laser sight).

Ammunition and Weapons of the 40mm Super Rounds needs prose/text, not just a link... Speaking of, this needs to be in the ammunition template.

Night-time is hyphenated. You wrote night time on the sights page.

On Weapon Mechanisms on main weapons page, you capitalized and lower cased the beginning of your statements sporadically - choose one, please.

V high quality art!

 

[Zack]

I have fixed all the things.

 

[Zack]

Added a line to the ammunition heading under the 40mm super ammunition type page.

 

[FrostJaeger]

What is the 40mm Super Telescoping Fragmentation Grenade’s area of effect, @Zack?

 

[Ametheliana]

What is the 40mm Super Telescoping Fragmentation Grenade’s area of effect?

 

[Zack]

'its a tier 3 grenade'

for simplicity's sake, I'm just going to match it up to a real life grenade and say 15 meters.

 

[Ametheliana]

Approved