This review is for: Mobile Operational Geological Surveyor - MOGS
The submitted article is/has…
[X] A general topic sentence under the title header
[X] Artwork
[X] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[X] In the proper format/template
[X] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[X] Easy to read and understand
[X] Wikified
[X] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[X] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does not…
[X] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[X] Obtusely redundant
[X] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[X] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[X] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred
[X] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[X] Use bombastic language
[X] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (Although it consists of short sections underneath the headers, it tells me everything I need to know about this submission.)
[X] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[X]Lacking Detail (It's a Nashoba submission, what can I say?)
The article has…
[X] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[ ] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[X] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[X] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.
Summary
Note here if any minor issues are present. These are issues you would like to see changed but will not necessarily hold up approval
Just include an armor DR that is less than 10 before taking off the tags, and this is just fine. But given your track record and the quality of the submission already, I'll be approving this anyway.
Status: Approved.
