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Approved Submission [Yamatai] Separa'Shan Physiology update.

Soban

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Submission Type: Update
Template Used: None
Submission WIP URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:user:soban:separaphysiology
Submission Destination URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=species:separa_shan:physiology

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FM Approved Yet? No, @Wes
Faction requires art? No

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? No

Notes: Several small changes and expansions to the Separa'Shan Physiology. The most important is clarifying that they are cold blooded.
 
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Will look at this tonight.
 
There's some empty sections:

Skeletal Structure & Muscular System


Head

3-day approval timer once the issue is fixed.

Also this should go in species:separa_shan: not faction.
 
It looks like that was a section divider, not a stand-alone section. I've reworked the header to be more clear.

Also, it looks like there are quite a few Separa'Shan articles that are in the faction namespace. Should all of them be moved to species?
 
According to the style guide, any time you have a header ( ==== Headers ==== ) it has to be followed by text before the next header. HEaders double as editable page sections so any header with nothing after it is considered an empty section.

Articles only go in species if they're about the actual species (e.g. physiology, etc.) and not a nation or culture, or other type of faction.
 
I've ensured that the editable Header section has text so that when you hit the edit button it will allow you to edit that section.

I've also moved the destination to the species namespace.
 
I mean that headers cannot immediately follow each other, like this:

===== Header =====
Some text must go here, cannot be empty <--
==== Another Header ====
Also more text here

Also, the page title needs to be more specific. "Physiology" is not a suitable article for an article that's only for one species.

The title needs an "overview" paragraph describing what the article is about. This should come directly after the H1 title header.
 
Ok, I've formatted the way I think you want it. It took me a bit longer due to a major change in adding the color charts and a tweak to the formatting of the Life Stages.
 
The title needs an "overview" paragraph describing what the article is about. This should come directly after the H1 title header.
I think this needs to be addressed.
 
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