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Approved Character [YSS Kaiyo II] Riku Tanaka

Just a few minor changes.

Kyoto was called Geshrinopolis until YE 24, so change his birthplace name to that.

"...to being invading. At the..." (invaded, not invading)

"...of YE 40 Mark signs up for the Star Army..." (Can this be past tense?)

Anything else, @Wes?
 
He's just a tad bit young - 1日 1月 YE 20 is the youngest he can be if he joined in early YE 40 (1日 1月 YE 40)
 
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