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Approved Character Alphaeus Nasica (NDC

Jack Pine

Staff Member
FM of NDC
Game Master
Character Forum Mod
I hope you don't mind, but I went through and cleaned up formatting a bit. Also fixed a link for ye16, however you need to link anything linkable on his page. The gun, other years, factions, places, etc. Also Marumbi is a redlink which needs to be fixed via making a page, or changing it to normal text.

I'm still reading over his history and such, but this is just preliminary once over for layout. Also skills need filled out under them a bit as they're just the skill headings at the moment. This can just short paragraph blurps that note his training and use of said skills.
 

Jack Pine

Staff Member
FM of NDC
Game Master
Character Forum Mod
His history looks good to me, personality and description too. Once the layout stuff is addressed, and whisper looks it over, it should be good.
 

Whisper

Staff Member
Submissions Reviewer
FM of NDC
Game Master
Story and the rest looks good to me. Once the other issues have been addressed Alphaeus has my approval.
 

The KrimsonWulf

FM of Nepleslia
I'm finishing them up tonight. Adding links to his home and Backlinks to the sterling. Once I have the item info I'll add those as we go. As more of an overall loadout
 

demibear

Staff Member
Game Master
Character Forum Mod
With Whisper saying you have his approval once you are done, this looks good to me.
 
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