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APPROVED SUBMISSION [Galactic Horizon] Pellis Intelligent Survival Suit

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SirSkully

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@FrostJaeger here is the second part of that thing I was annoying you with last night, I am pretty sure I made all the changes we spoke of but regardless here it is

@Kyle tagging you for nesh-nesh approval ^ -^

Note: please ignore the fact this was in approved submissions for a bit, I goofed
 
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Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✔️ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ✔️ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ✔️ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✔️ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ✔️ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ✔️ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ N/A ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ✔️ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✔️ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ❌ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Here are some fixes this article still needs:
  1. @Kyle, the Faction Manager of the Kingdom of Neshaten, needs to post his approval of the submission in this thread.
Status: Pending
 
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✔️ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ✔️ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ✔️ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✔️ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ✔️ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ✔️ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ N/A ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ✔️ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✔️ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✔️ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Status: Approved

Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...

[ ✔️ ] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
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[ ✔️ ] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
[ ✔️ ] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
[ ✔️ ] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)
 
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Frost, did the fact that this suit is named the PISS just whizz over your head?
 
Frost, I worked hard on this armour - you are fully aware it went through multiple iterations before I felt like putting it up on the wiki and even then I was more than happy to make adjustments where needed, which is why it has three honeycombs now instead of the intended one.

But no, I'm not changing it, and the reason you didn't bring it up sooner is because maybe there isn't actually anything wrong with it?

Changing it would make this suit more redundant than having another armour on the wiki already is, I always try to strike a fine line between unique and useful for the most part when I submit something - and you're asking me to remove one half of that reasoning, essentially making this armour worthless.

So you'd like me to make this armour worthless? No, of course I'm not going to like that, and if I see anybody making changes without me then this whole thing is going to put me in a worse mood than it already has.
 
Made a post here, but to sum it up and talk more specifically on this, normally peple make EV suits that do all this without changing forms, you're trying to penalize a self imposed penalty that was meant to give this character. Nothing is really effected by these numbers.
 
Is someone taking the piss? The answer is no. Only a staff member can un-approve a setting submission. This has not happened and until it does, the status of the submission is unchanged.
 
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