Approved Character [Bastardpiece Theater] Dick Mariner

[BionicSamurai]

Character Article URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ch ... ck_mariner
Preferred Plot's GM: CadetNewb

*sigh* took me long enough. Let me know how badly I messed up. ^_^

 

[Wes]

PM sent to GM Cadetnewb.

 

[CadetNewb]

I'm sorry for the delay, but I haven't been able to get to your character - it got a little busy. At a quick glance, things look alright. It's not until a little later that I can get into details though. Just give me a little bit, and I'll have a proper review Friday.

 

[BionicSamurai]

I'm sorry for the delay, but I haven't been able to get to your character - it got a little busy. At a quick glance, things look alright. It's not until a little later that I can get into details though. Just give me a little bit, and I'll have a proper review Friday.

No worries, I'm the one who took a week and a half to this point. ^_^

 

[CadetNewb]

Well, that took longer to get to than I expected!

At this point, I've read over your character and have to say that everything's alright. There's some sentence flow and grammar tidbits here and there, and the skills all beginning with "Dick" didn't seem quite right, but that's not really anything I really an worried about at this point.

This character is APPROVED

 

[BionicSamurai]

I'll see what I can do about polish, I could use "Richard" instead.