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Approved Submission Black Rose AMR

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*puts on his skully mask*

You can use it

In all seriousness tho I believe the MOASS is a public product so there's no reason they couldn't especially given s6 and gh often collaborate, id say the only things they couldn't just outright use would be the custom models.
 
Apologies for the delay in posting a review, @Jack Pine. >.<

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Here are some fixes this sub-article still needs:
  1. Would you mind adding a brief sentence to the sections with a "FIXME" in them, please?
  2. Would you mind adding the performance statistics (specifically, those found on the ammunition template) for the .50cal variant of the Sutafaia Fusion Shell, please? I know there's some listed on the SFS article, but they appear to be for the 50mm variant.
When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!

Status: Pending

Note: Also, @Alex Hart - are there any ballistics-related values that should be changed?
 
Well, taking a look at it it's a bit of an odd-ball. It fires out to 4,500 yards, which is further than the effective range of its S6-SCPR ammunition would allow for by about two or three times. I'm not sure if this is due to a higher muzzle velocity, something of the sort. Either way, an explanation for how the round reaches so far should be given in the article to explain the inconsistancy.

Also strangely, it hits just as hard as MWS2 Sniper Rifle configuration, but shoots with a far higher fire rate even in semi automatic mode (where it is more than double the fire rate of the MWS2's Sniper configuration.)

I'm not sure how these things will effect its review, however I'm very curious as to whether or not these details are intentional, or if there is an explanantion for them.
 
probably only a couple thousand, but I didn't include a specific number because I figure there wouldn't be a ton of characters using this in the least. I didn't see it as a necessary detail, but I can throw a number on it if absolutely need be.
 
So one thing I’m confused about is how it says this was developed in “a few hours”. Is that a figure of speech or an actual description of how fast it was developed.

Generally I would think designing something like this might take at least two or three weeks (given that manufacturing capability is beyond what we have IRL) but I wasn’t sure if it was just a turn of phrase, so figured I’d ask about this.
 
It's not a very complicated weapon, it's basically an old design with a new spin. The other thing about that is it's a custom tailored piece, Rose knew what Sarah wanted in a rifle, and it was simple as designing components that fit that and then combining them into a final product. If you still think that's still too short of a time, I can extend it.
 
I’d say that given what you told me, and that since it’s not a one off it probably had to go through safety testing, a week seems reasonable to me.
 
It looks like the weight concerns have been taken care of as well as the price ones, so I think this is ready for a review.

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APPROVED
 
Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...

[ check ] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
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