Zack
Inactive Member
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- I agree
Taking a break from super-large ships to make a regular-large ship.
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Approved Submission C11
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Zack
Inactive Member
The C5 is a lot of things, including a warship, Science ship, Tug, Lightshow, transport, and Industrial Ship. The spacers also use it as a communications ship iirc.
It'll be a lot easier to build a base model version of the ship and then create variants based on that, than it would to make all possible versions of the ship at once.
It'll be a lot easier to build a base model version of the ship and then create variants based on that, than it would to make all possible versions of the ship at once.
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Here's some fixes this article still needs:
1. It's length is that of a Teir 11 ship, not that of a Teir 14. Either the length needs to be changed, or the teir needs to be dropped. In order to qualify for T14, it's length needs to be between 750~1500 meters. I'm not sure if perhaps you put the 760 in the wrong place. However, this is the only problem that I have found with this.
Once this is fixed, then I'll take a second gander.
[X] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[X] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[X] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[X] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[X] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[X] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[X] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[X] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[-] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[X] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Here's some fixes this article still needs:
1. It's length is that of a Teir 11 ship, not that of a Teir 14. Either the length needs to be changed, or the teir needs to be dropped. In order to qualify for T14, it's length needs to be between 750~1500 meters. I'm not sure if perhaps you put the 760 in the wrong place. However, this is the only problem that I have found with this.
Once this is fixed, then I'll take a second gander.
Soban
Convention Veteran
Kyle, it says the height is 760 meters, which is tier 14. While I agree this was probably meant to be length based on the design of the ship. It seems odd to me that it would be a different tier depending on its orientation. It is possible for ships to have height as their longest dimension. Take for example the crime lord's ship from Solo which is a tower design.
Not according to the DRv3, which doesn't list height *or width, for that matter* as being the deciding factors for the Tier. Please understand that I know what you are saying, and yes I do agree, however I need to go by what the DRv3 states.
In order for this to pass muster, it's the length that needs to be changed (it's a simple flip of values, that's all)
Zack
Inactive Member
I went ahead and made the change from height to length. Ultimately I don’t think that’s worth having an argument about but the thinking behind it was that I wanted to match up my starships with more realistic designs ie: the axis of thrust is down, and the ship is more like a tower than a boat.
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Otherwise, this is approved. Thank you for making that change
[x] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
[x] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki (Wes will need to do this, I don't have the perms)
[x] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
[x] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
[x] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)
Otherwise, this is approved. Thank you for making that change
