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Approved Submission Dokavor: Heat Loving Reptiles in Space

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13ft tall lizards, now that is scary.

That aside, its a neat little species you've got here, im no NTSE by any means but one thing that did stand out to me was their metal called soulite. From the way you've described it, nothing stands out as being some fancy OP creation or anything and just emits warmth. I couldn't tell you with 100% certainty but you may be asked to make a small page for it, on a side note what influences did you have for naming them as you have?
 
The naming is actually just random names I though sounded cool, I had a whole page of names and these were my favourite, Yea all soulite does it makes things warmer.
 
Sounds pretty cool, but yeah idk how faction materials are handled these days but given that heat emitting metal, at least to me, is very unique it may need its own page ir a little bit of space magic explaining. I do like the idea of them managing to cut back on heating bills though lol.
 
Finally got a chance to read this all properly at home and also hope this put this back on the rader of NTSE. All I can say is big lizards, not sure how well they might deal with living in other species settlements since the one can be two storeys tall but love the idea of them.
 
These are pretty cool, in all honesty. I like their culture and all those gems everywhere. For Soulite, the page needs to link outside of itself. It could link to this species, to the materials page, and could probably link to DRv3 in an "armor class" bullet point.

Also, one major question pops up after reading the main species wiki and that is, where is their system?

Good going, BloodyScarlet!
 
I am not asking for the system page to be made or any details on it, just a general "what side of the galaxy map are they on" or where abouts are they located on the map type question.
 
I would say probably somewhere north of the sanctum system but maybe just 2 or three squares above it somewhere kinda of out of the way from other civilizations but still kinda close
 
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Approved- both species and the material sub-article.
 
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