Star Army

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Note: This is a play-by-post RPG site. If you're looking for the tabletop miniatures wargame "5150: Star Army" instead, see Two Hour Wargames.

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Approved Submission Dusklights (NDC)

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Andrew

SARP WikiGuru and Staff. Here to serve!
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The History Section is blank. If the Overview is intended to be the history, it has no dates in it. Please resolve this section. The very top of the article should be a one or two-sentence blurb, and things like the manufacturer, etc should not be in that same section.

So other than some arrangement changes, this looks good. (This points out that the actual template needs an update, sorry if that seems conflicting but it should at least follow modern wiki guidelines)
 

Jack Pine

FM of NDC
🎖️ Game Master
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I think I have fixed it, and filled out history. I completely missed that section oops, my bad on that one, not sure how I managed to miss an entire section lol.
 

Andrew

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Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and the article template. Is all the information for struct present?
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and credited in the OOC section.
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.


Approved.
 
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