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Approved Submission Essian Wine

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Really don't understand how they can make wine if no feet for stompy
 
Hi Soban

At a glance here,

  • The article's history section has no dates in it. It would be nice to know when it became available.
  • Might even be cool to mention the cultural expo in the article.
  • Is there a price or price range for the wines?
  • The article contains only 1 wiki link other than your name. There are several opportunities for things to be wikified in the article if you could please add some.
  • Other than that looks interesting, would be horrible to pick up a bottle with the venom in it by mistake!
Anyway some pretty minor things there.
 
Due to a month with no replies the submission is considered abandoned.
 
I thought I had responded to this.

>The article's history section has no dates in it. It would be nice to know when it became available.

It's a general article on wine. It's always been available.

>Might even be cool to mention the cultural expo in the article.

Not really sure how to do that as this is a general article.

>Is there a price or price range for the wines?

Not really, this isn't a specific product. It's a general article on wines in general.

>Links

I'm still working on adding them.
 
Moved back to submissions!
 
Hello, have you had a chance to make the requested changes/updates to the article?
 
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