Ace, Make sure to keep your posts in past-tense. Your characters can speak in present-tense, but try to keep the rest of it Past-tense.
Gabriel, Please make sure you really are reading all the previous posts. You keep mistaking things and incorrectly naming people. both Juni and Hei are ranks, and calling someone "Juni-Hei" is like calling them "lieutennant-Private". Try somethink more along the lines of "Juni-san" or "instructor-Juni" like my NPC said.
You guys should try to interact with one another, this time was supposed to be socialization between the PC's and some of the NPC's, as well as giving me time to acclimate you to Sarp's general RP style.
I Must Stress PLEASE read all the posts in the thread, and Please try to interact with one another. I will try to get posts out to you guys as fast as I can, but I would like to see you interact with one another in more than one liners.