Approved Character [Francia] Armin Heidrich

[Semjax]

Character Page: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:armin_heidrich
Plot GM: @CadetNewb

Think I did pretty much everything, if @Abwehran Commander or someone else sees something wrong do tell me.

 

[CadetNewb]

Armin Approved! Now all we need are some Titans.

 

[Abwehran Commander]

All right @Semjax, time for my little review session. Overall, I'm pleased with how it turned out. I just have a question.

Is he supposed to be 34 Standard/Earth Years old?

If so, you might want to make mention of that. Abwehran years tend to be long and Abwehran physical growth a tad strange compared to other humanoids. A 34 standard year old Abwehran would be 9 Abwehran Years old (9 * 3.551 = ~34) and would appear to look as if he were 19 years old or so.

If he was 34 Abwehran years old, he would be approximately 120 standard years old and appear to look as if he were 54 years old.

If you want him to appear to be 34 years of age, he would probably be 21 Abwehran years old or 74 Standard Years old.

I know it might be a tad confusing, so I apologize for that issue. I'll fix that in my CCG revisions.

Other than that, I'm not picky about the rest of his page.

 

[Semjax]

Alright I'll make the note he's 120 standard years old with looks of 54

 

[Abwehran Commander]

Then I, as Abwehran Faction/Species manager, do by approve this character. :3