Approved Submission [Galactic Horizon] Bubble Blower Grenade

[SirSkully]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=corp:galactic_horizon:gh-u2-4a_bubble_blower_grenade-shield

Submission Type: Utility Equipment
Template Used: Modified Ammo Template

Faction:
FM Approved Yet?: Yes @club24 can confirm
Faction requires art?: No? although I may be looking at getting some later

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? No

Notes: I feel like I may have missed something with explaining the shield, so if you know what that is then please LMK

 

[club24]

well one thing i think would go well in this article is an appearance section to give deets on what the deployed shield would look like, maybe give examples of certain munitions impacting it or such idk but none the less Concept Approved

 

[SirSkully]

oh wait, I need to change the links RQ

 

[SirSkully]

so I was going to edit the links to be the nomenclature instead of "bubble_blower"
I'll do that when it lets me

 

[SirSkully]

okay that was spooky, but it has been changed

 

[Ametheliana]

First sentence is kind of wonky. It needs to be split into two and put an "It is..." at the beginning of the first sentence.

Approved

 

[SirSkully]

I made it less wonky

Also THANKS

 

[club24]

changed the nomenclature of this item to be inline with the proper format.

 

[club24]

pagename changed to corp:galactic_horizon:gh-u2-4a_bubble_blower_grenade-shield