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Approved Submission [Galactic Horizon] Painite Combat Mech, Commisioned by Akemi

SirSkully

SirSkully

🦊 FM of Neshaten
🦾 FM of Nepleslia
🎖️ Game Master
Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=corp:galactic_horizon:gh-m3-4c_painite_combat_mech
Submission Faction(s)
  2. Outlaws (Independent)
Submission Terms
  1. I agree
Submission Type: Power Armour
Template Used: Power Armour Template (Lightly Modified)

Faction: Galactic Horizon, Akemi's Umbrella
FM Approved Yet?: Yes, @club24 and @Ametheliana
Faction requires art?: Yes, Ame threw a pic at me

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? Yes, the aforementioned Ame thing
Previously Submitted? Yes but there was a miscommunication and I requested it was taken down.

Notes: well @Ametheliana here is your mech finally, after issues and redos and everything it is finally ready.
 
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So I've looked over part of it and notice that it's made of nerimium. This material is supposedly only made by Nepleslia and several other high-end material manufacturers that are unnamed. Has Galactic Horizons ever made anything out of Nerimium before? Or maybe there is another reason for their expertise?
 
We have made things out of Nerimium before, the ORC was the first thing we made from it.
That and we just made the design for Akemi, they are the ones making it and it even says that on the Wiki.
 
I see, that seems like an okay way to do things.
I read through Akemi's Umbrella but I never saw any Manufacturing capabilities referenced. @Ametheliana could you weigh in on how this monstrosity will be created?
 
Actually I'm not sure if Akemi is manufacturing them, but I know they are buying the design.
 
Oh, in my agreement with Trinity Star Shipping, a station could repair and build ships. I assume a mecha is not too different than a ship.
 
I don't understand the process here but I'll try to work it through.
GH makes the design and Trinary shipping builds it with parts from who? Or is it Trinary that is sending the parts for assembly at a Koga station?

EDIT: Huh, ninja much?
 
That makes enough sense to me.

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Status: Approved.
 
Actually hold up a second, I just re-read the commision SYNC thread and was supposed to give this thing FTL speeds as well - sorry about this but I'll chuck the speeds of that in and ask for re-approval once that has been taken care of - terribly sorry.
 
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