Approved Submission [Galactic Horizon] Skusten - Material

[SirSkully]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=materials:skusten

Submission Faction(s)

1. Neshaten

Submission Terms

1. I agree

Well club has already seen this, as both a Neshy dude and a GH dude I just need an NTSE mod to look at this <3

 

[Yoerik]

Hi SKully,

Since I'm a chemist, I am intrigued by your attempt to create some exotic kind of metal that I haven't seen before.

Let's see what we can do here:

[ x ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✔] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✔ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✔ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✔ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ x ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✔ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✔ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✔ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✔ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Just two fixes are really needed:

1. Use the corp:galactic_horizon: namespace
2. Add a list of weaknesses/disadvantages

Other than that, I am pleased. If you need any help with characterizing the material chemically or physically, let me know.

 

[club24]

Dont all materials belong in the material space?

I swear ive seen restricted/private stuff in there too

 

[Yoerik]

The materials namespace would work as well, but since this is a personal product by GH, putting it on their's is better.

 

[club24]

Fair enough, your the man with the plan in this case it just seemed strange to me but I'll keep it in mind.

 

[FrostJaeger]

Not to be rude, @Yoerik, but Wes said here that all materials go in the materials: namespace.

 

[Yoerik]

Understood. Well, use the materials: namespace then.

 

[SirSkully]

I'll look into adding that section soon, thanks.

 

[SirSkully]

@Yoerik I added a weaknesses section, well I tried to without it ruining the metal completely - what do you think?

 

[Yoerik]

It's good Skully. The main thing was that the metal seemed to be overpowered since it had no setbacks, and so looked kind of like a 'marketing campaign talk' (No harm intended). With that in place, I'll have to say:

Approved!