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Approved Submission [GH] Dualarity Anti-Armour Rifle

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I will take this one,

Before we get started on the review, could you please fix the following:

  1. Incorrectly Nested Sections
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The headers have to be in descending order, and cannot skip levels.

ie.
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If you need any help with this let me know. Once this is fixed I will start reviewing.
 
I helped you out. :)

I don't see any other issues with it.

Three Day Approval Timer Applied, Expires 02/22/19 @ 20:10.
 
@Andrew sorry to drag you back again but would there be any issue if i bumped this to tier 6? I just realised i grabbed the older version from my onenote

if not I’ll just leave it as is
 
  • I think it is acceptable to put it to Tier 6.
  • However, I think that Effective Range: Accurate up to 3000m, maximum projectile range of 4000m should be Effective Range: Accurate up to 2000m, maximum projectile range of 3000m
  • The tradeoff increased power for decreased range.
 
Original 3-day timer still applies -

Three Day Approval Timer Applied, Expires 02/22/19 @ 20:10.
 
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

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[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Approved.
 
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