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Rejected Submission [GH] Event Horizon MKII

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club24

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Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=corp:galactic_horizon:gh-w4-2s_event_horizon_mk2
Submission Faction(s)
  1. Neshaten
Submission Terms
  1. I agree
Like the rifle i made recently I’ve had it lying around for a bit and did some brief touching up but ultimately i wont know how to modify it till i submit it so here it is

as always im super open to needing to change it, ideally I’d like to keep the tier high and the barrels i don’t want to change muchdue to art but i am flexible with other stuff

the art isn’t currently on the page as i made it on mobile during a uni lecture

As always this is fm approved as im currently the fm of nesh as of submitting this
 
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This is next on this list of things I can review. I will start my review shortly.
 
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ❌ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.


From what I can see here this submission is almost nonsense. 9000 Rounds Per Minute? At Tier 6? This is just a really low-quality article and the numbers don't make any sense at all. I don't see anything in sight that can come of this that is good for Star Army's setting. This article is REJECTED.
 
That seems like an instant and quick sucker punch right out the gate for what seems like very simple issues to fix... And despite the fact i dont do a whole lot for the NTSE these days due to my lack of free time, i try not to tell people their articles are low quality or belittle their creations they put any amount of effort into.
 
So does this mean im also not allowed to submit it in future if i tune it down a bit?

Cause the 9000 does make sense if you keep in mind its 3 sets of 3 barrels operating at once, which is why its mounted only not free hand

but im always happy to drop it down, just wanted to make a cool gun out of some cool art and an old idea
 
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