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  • Current IC Month: 8月 YE 42 (through November 21, 2020)

Approved Submission Guppy-class Small Exploration Craft

Whisper

Submissions Reviewer
FM of NDC
Game Master
Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=corp:noval_heavy_industries:products:craft:nh-y-3_guppy
Submission Faction(s)
  1. NDC
Submission Terms
  1. I agree
Hello friends!

I'm back-ish and starting to get back into the swing of things! And you know what that means! Setting submissions!

This submission is for a small, single-person exploration and utility vessel. It features a comfy cockpit and two manipulator arms to assist it in its work. Despite being a 'background/set piece' craft,, I've designed it so that if someone wants to go have some Subnautica adventures or pull an Amuro Ray and get their Ball on, it should do the trick. :)

Thanks!

As a NDC co-FM, I self-approve this message.
 

Ametheliana

Moderator
Staff Member
Submissions Reviewer
Game Master
Character Forum Mod
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Here are some fixes this article still needs:

"Fielded by" would likely be "New Dusk Conclave, Independent"
Seems fast for size and use. If you want to knock it down, go ahead but not required.

My fix isn't holding up approval so, Approved
 

Whisper

Submissions Reviewer
FM of NDC
Game Master
Thanks for the fast turnaround, Ame!

Fielded by has been corrected and I've bumped the speed from .37c to .2c. Not sure what I had in mind when I put that down the first time, but I agree with you! Thanks for calling it out. :)
 
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