Approved Submission [Horizon] Adrenaline Utility Gear

[club24]

Submission Type: Personal Equipment
Template Used: None
Submission WIP URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:corp:galactic_horizon:gh-g1-7f
Submission Destination URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:galactic_horizon:gh-g1-7f

Faction:
FM Approved Yet?: No, @Jack Pine and @Ethereal for IIS involvement
Faction requires art?: No? although I will be looking at getting some later if needed

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? No

Notes:
the first official product of Galactic Horizon, low tech and publicly available. Price is easily changeable as I have no experience in trying to price things in the setting, Drv3 rating was excluded as it has no weapons in it and the only protection it offers is scrape and cut protection for the forearms and legs along with atmospheric filtering (designed more to filter light gasses than anything severely lethal)

 

[Jack Pine]

FM approved

 

[Wes]

I haven't got a chance to fully look this over yet but I noticed a lot of "it's" grammar errors you should fix.

See: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=guide:its

 

[club24]

Just like last time then, man i need to work on my grammar.
I'll have them done soon.

Also I didn't know we had a page for that o.o

 

[Ethereal]

Approved as requested!

 

[club24]

I went through and fixed all the "it's" issues I could find

 

[Wes]

Approved.

 

[club24]

pagename changed to corp:galactic_horizon:gh-g1-7f_adrenaline_utility_gear

 

[club24]

updated the page slightly, price lowered to 300KS as the company has ceased manufacturing them but there is so many of the damned things left in circulation they won't go out of stock for a long time.

Also adjusted the manufacturer to be Horizon only as they would have done this when they shifted into Neshaten territory at the start of the year.