Approved Submission [Horizon/Akemis] Jadeite Gunship

[club24]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=corp:galactic_horizon:gh-s1-1f_jadeite_class_gunship

Submission Faction(s)

Submission Terms

1. I agree

Here we go my first attempt at a starship, I expect to encounter several issues with this based on my own inexperience so reviewers don't hold back! Particular areas I'd like double checked is speed and damage, including number of weapons and if the ones im using are acceptable so.
ping @Ametheliana for accepting this ship design which is long overdue
ping @Kai for checking the couple of origin weapons are ok to use
ping @Zack or Jack Pine for FM approval
and another thing to note, at the precise time of submitting this article the Falcon Drive has not yet been approved however it was essentially approved onces right before i had to scale back the speed so im going off the assumption it will be approved by wes once more very soon and i dont expect this ship to be approved before that happens anyway.

There is new art provided by Ame which was commissioned from Banzz

Also gonna tag @FrostJaeger and @Alex Hart since I know those dudes are DRv3 handy in case I'm missing something ^^

 

[Zack]

Fm approval

 

[Kai]

The Heavy Laser Turret is perfectly fine to use, just be aware of the intended DR changes as it's being revamped and currently still under review.

The GIPC is also fine, just be aware that the article is obsolete and that it's due for replacement soon.

 

[Zack]

The art looks great btw! Did you do it yourself?

 

[club24]

In the thread opening post i said, art commission by ame from banzz

And kai could you suggest anything to replace the gipc?

 

[Kai]

I'll be making a direct replacement sometime this week probably

 

[Ametheliana]

What say ye, reviewers?

 

[club24]

Technically @Ametheliana this can't be approved until @Wes gives final approval on the Falcon and I also want to chat to @Kai about the weapons

 

[FrostJaeger]

@club24 - Mind if I mark this as "On Hold" until the Heavy Laser Turret's update is approved?

 

[club24]

By all means go ahead, can you lmk the new link and dr and such?

 

[FrostJaeger]

Before I review this, @club24, I have one request: would you mind adding what sensor and communication systems the Jadeite uses to the Digital Systems section, please?

 

[club24]

As a matter of fact I do mind >:U

So do you mean like, link an article? or did I miss the section entirely, im lazy and at school so cant be bothered checking wiki ;3

 

[FrostJaeger]

@club24 - Ye, link an article or two.

 

[club24]

can i insert a link to the hubble telescope for optics?

 

[FrostJaeger]

Sure, @club24.

 

[club24]

That was a joke, I will probs go find that one sensor that skully made and make a fly-eye out of it

 

[SirSkully]

;3

 

[FrostJaeger]

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Status: Approved

Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...

[ ] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
[ ] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki
[ ] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
[ ] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
[ ] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)

 

[club24]

>Hasn't yet added links for sensors
>Gets approved
>.>
What manner of sorcery is this!

Also @Ametheliana your ship is now done so uh, happy exploring