Approved Submission [Horizon] GH Long Range Striker Missile

[club24]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=corp:galactic_horizon:ammunition:gh_long_range_striker_missile

Submission Faction(s)

1. Neshaten

Submission Terms

1. I agree

As promised @FrostJaeger here is a T9 long range missile just for u ;3

@Kyle for FM approval, strap a fox to this for instant troop deployment, which before anyone steals is an idea i had since watching a certain anime a couple weeks ago >.>

unlike many of my other submissions i decided to try testing the boundaries a little with this one and making it more up to scratch with IRL stuff but slightly better cause future tech, but please let me know if im off in any of the values by an atrocious amount ^^

 

[Kyle]

FM Approved :3

 

[FrostJaeger]

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ N/A ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Here are some fixes this article still needs:

1. Although it's not specifically a requirement per se, would you mind detailing the missile's appearance a bit, please?

When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!

Status: Pending

 

[club24]

*grumbles about how basic missiles look and how it goes too fast to see anyway*
Gimme a couple mins to quickly write it in no problems

 

[FrostJaeger]

As @club24 has made the requested changes (thanks for making them so quickly, by the way!)...

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ N/A ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Status: Approved

Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...

[ ] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
[ ] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki
[ ] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
[ ] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
[ ] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)