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Approved Submission [Horizon] Zytone Heavy-Combat Power Armour

club24

Everything Is Magical
FM of Neshaten
Game Master
Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=corp:galactic_horizon:gh-m2-4a_zytone_combat_armour
Submission Faction(s)
Neshaten
Submission Terms
I agree
Here we go, the final piece of the puzzle is finally done, after this expect to see neshie things popping up for a while until later this year when I finish the GH frigate.

Although i have a shiny new badge and can technically self approve I have already spoken to @Kyle about this and he's never had an issue with it before wants some small ones for foxies IIRC so unless something changed he has FM Approved this.
 
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✔ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ✔ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ✔ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✔ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ✔ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ✔ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ✔ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ✔ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✔ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✔ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Here are some fixes this article still needs:
  1. Quick question: how long does the Zytone's Cirrostratus Drive have to be "recharged" in between its twenty-second bursts?
  2. Would you mind the Zytone's price to the article, please? (Perhaps in the Statistics & Performance section?)
When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!

Status: Pending
 

club24

Everything Is Magical
FM of Neshaten
Game Master
I have added a recharge rate to the movement section of the article indented below the atmospheric flight where it lists the 20 second bursts

Added a base price of 20 000KS to the stats section
 
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✔ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ✔ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ✔ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✔ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ✔ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ✔ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ✔ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ✔ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✔ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✔ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Status: Approved

Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...

[ ✔ ] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
[ ✔ ] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki
[ ✔ ] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
[ ✔ ] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
[ ✔ ] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)
 
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