Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
[ X ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ X ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ X ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ X ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ X ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ X ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ X ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ X ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Notes:
1. I edited the page to fix a minor grammar issue I found.
2. I hereby give FM approval for this submission as FM for Non-Playable Background Factions
Here's some fixes this article still needs:
1. Remove forced line breaks (try a bulleted list instead)
2. KS article only needs to be linked the first time it is mentioned
3. It doesn't seem to explain what a hyperspace tap actually is or link to such an explanation
When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!