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Approved Character Jack Trevor

Looks like a great start! I’d recommend adding some links, final details, and maybe switch the character art to the male generic NPC image to soothe my BURNING OCD!
 
I’m liking what I’m seeing!
I did notice a couple of things that could probably use clarification. Under skills it says that he could use all guns, but in the galaxy at large there are so many different types of firearms with so many different methods of operation and function he would surely find a preference in firearms along with specific training for that type of weapon. Judging by his inventory I would assume that he favors ballistic weapons. Additionally, with his background as a marine he would probably have powered armor training. I’m not really saying OP or anything, I actually think he’d have more skills than listed. In this setting being able to drive a car isn’t really necessary, autopilots and such. Maybe he is good at that?

I’d say approved for the plot as is, but I think he would have an even wider diversity of skills!
 
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