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Abandoned Submission KE-09-5A Ferret T.O.R.I

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Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ❌ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ❌ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ❌ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ❌ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ❌ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ❌ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Here's some fixes this article still needs:

1. WIP URL was submitted in the Destination URL field, edit if possible.
2. Please rearrange into the drone template
3. Style: URL in the middle of the page needs to be made into a wiki link. Also, there's some parts that need grammar fixes (no period at the end of sentences, for example).
4. There's a ton of things referenced in the article and none of them are linked. Please fix that!

When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!
 
Though have a question, does the Star Army have anything to check for atmospheric conditions that is already in a military platform ?
 
Not sure, but that sounds useful.
 
Ame going to put this on hold for now having some trouble with it so going to revisit it at a later time can put this in unapproved for now while I work on it later.
 
Alright, seems like Wes was interested so it'd be neato to come back to. If you need any help, my door is open.
 
Oh I uh spoke to Scherer about this a while back but I'll be taking this over and finishing it off
 
Make a new thread when you have finished the submission, then, please.
 
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