Approved Submission Ke-V8 Super Kawarime Class

[Nashoba]

Submission URL

http://stararmy.com/wiki/doku?it=stararmy:small_craft:ke-v8_3a_kawarime_class

Submission Faction(s)

1. Yamatai (except Elysia)

Submission Terms

1. I agree

This is an overhaul of the original V8 Kawarime. Most of the systems are updates from other fighters. The following items are new and unique.

Secure Mission Kit https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:stararmy:equipment:mission_kit
Moeru Suisei https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:stararmy:weapons:ammunition:blazing_comets
Nashi https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:stararmy:weapons:ammunition:noneshallpass
Shi no Ame https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:stararmy:weapons:ammunition:death_rain

 

[Wes]

FM Approved.

 

[Yuuki]

I've put a lot of updated Nashoba stuff through NTSE, so I'd like to take this. It's rather technical but Nash articles are typically well-SARPed.

 

[Yuuki]

I Wikified this sub-article because I should have when I did the DR update for the Nodachi: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=stararmy:weapons:ke-v9-w3300
I also got green-smileys for all of your articles.

One thing I would like to see is a short history section, since all of the submunition articles reference the Super Kawarime Project. Even just "in YE X calls for an updated version of the Kawarime because of Event Y lead to the development of the Super Kawarime starting in YE Z" would be enough I think, since progress obviously marches on in Yamatai. I am particularly a fan of the Blazing Comet.

On first look it uses all 8 OTWs (1x10 = 4, 2x9 = 4), no TEWGs (So it has room to grow or specialize), and everything else placed on limited external hardpoints, so V3 compliance is good there.

 

[Immortal Cyan]

Would it be possible to integrate SPINE connections into the cockpit? Ejection seats and some variants of the survival kits would be cool as well.

 

[Alex Hart]

It might be nice to link the original Kawarime in the article somewhere.

 

[Yuuki]

I think the SPINE integration is assumed in modern SAoY tech?

 

[Nashoba]

Okay, The Super K does have spine, it has the same cockpit features as the original. So SPINE is available. There was a short history, but I fleshed it out a bit by adding that it was requested by Taisho Mikasa Sorano for the 2XF, which was the original user of the first generation Kawarime.

OOC, the reason for the Overhaul is the age of the Kawarime, so I took the opportunity to beef it up in the next generation.

 

[Yuuki]

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

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