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Approved Submission Keiyo City - Heavy Industrial City - YSE

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Okay looked this over and it looks fine don't see anything glaring. But my biggest question is, does it have any defenses? This looks like it would be a prime target during warfare but it doesn't have any listed way to defend itself.
 
The actual planet has a defense system that defends not only Keiyo but the other colonies on the surface. that will be submitted with the planet overhaul write up that I'm not ready to submit yet. https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:planet:shugosha_i and https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:system:shugosha (Overhaul Articles), Current OLD article - https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=system:shugosha . All these systems and planets, and locations are part of the Overhaul project that I've been submitting as I get them done for the Outer Colonies of Yamatai. So don't worry that is coming! Just like we did with the Jiyuu System and Siren System all the Overhauls will be submitted when they're done.

Shugosha I will also have a SAoY base on it once I get the more of the actual planet article done :)
 
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So there wont be any defense specifically dedicated/owned to this complex? Just the planetary defense that the whole planet has?
 
Okay let's go ahead and get this APPROVED I don't really see anything wrong with it.

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