Star Army

Star ArmyⓇ is a landmark of forum roleplaying. Opened in 2002, Star Army is like an internet clubhouse for people who love roleplaying, art, and worldbuilding. Anyone 18 or older may join for free. New members are welcome! Use the "Register" button below.

Note: This is a play-by-post RPG site. If you're looking for the tabletop miniatures wargame "5150: Star Army" instead, see Two Hour Wargames.

Approved Submission Kyoto Grand Central Station

Ametheliana

Sensei
Staff Member
Submissions Reviewer
FM of Nepleslia
FM of the Iromakuanhe
Game Master
I am confused why this has no mention of PAINT.

Just a side note: there would be no connections to Black Sands or Xiuluria.
 

Yoerik

Well-Known Member
Thanks @Ametheliana for the heads up. I'll add the part about the PAINT system shortly. Although the second thing...I was struggling to find connections between Kyoto and other cities on Yamatai, so I'll have to look up viable routes.
 

Ametheliana

Sensei
Staff Member
Submissions Reviewer
FM of Nepleslia
FM of the Iromakuanhe
Game Master
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✔ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✔ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✔ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ❌ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✔ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ ✔ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✔ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✔ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✔ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✔ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Here's some fixes this article still needs:
Grammar fix:
"12 platforms is available" is should be are
"The staircase enter the platforms..." enter should be enters or staircase needs to be plural.

Spelling fixes:
levelled--> leveled
metres--> meters
travellers--> travelers

Can the "electronic information boards" be volumetric and link to one of the volumetrics articles?

Thank you for such a cool article!!
 

Yoerik

Well-Known Member
@Ametheliana I fixed the grammar mistakes.

Spelling fixes:
levelled--> leveled
metres--> meters
travellers--> travelers
I use the correct British spelling of English, not American. Therefore, these words are spelled that way.

Can the "electronic information boards" be volumetric and link to one of the volumetrics articles?
I inserted this small change as well, linking to the Volumetric Display page.
 

club24

Everything Is Magical
FM of Neshaten
Game Master
I share in the british spelling my good friend, however we are a minority and not very well liked by wes when it comes to wiki articles, tis a sad time for using an s instead of z lol
 
Top