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Approved Submission Kyoto Grand Central Station

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I am confused why this has no mention of PAINT.

Just a side note: there would be no connections to Black Sands or Xiuluria.
 
Thanks @Ametheliana for the heads up. I'll add the part about the PAINT system shortly. Although the second thing...I was struggling to find connections between Kyoto and other cities on Yamatai, so I'll have to look up viable routes.
 
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✔️ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✔️ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✔️ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
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[ ✔️ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
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Here's some fixes this article still needs:
Grammar fix:
"12 platforms is available" is should be are
"The staircase enter the platforms..." enter should be enters or staircase needs to be plural.

Spelling fixes:
levelled--> leveled
metres--> meters
travellers--> travelers

Can the "electronic information boards" be volumetric and link to one of the volumetrics articles?

Thank you for such a cool article!!
 
@Ametheliana I fixed the grammar mistakes.

Spelling fixes:
levelled--> leveled
metres--> meters
travellers--> travelers

I use the correct British spelling of English, not American. Therefore, these words are spelled that way.

Can the "electronic information boards" be volumetric and link to one of the volumetrics articles?

I inserted this small change as well, linking to the Volumetric Display page.
 
I share in the british spelling my good friend, however we are a minority and not very well liked by wes when it comes to wiki articles, tis a sad time for using an s instead of z lol
 
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