Alright, since a Mod hasn't seen this yet, I'll make some suggestions for you.
I fixed the picture in your Wiki.
Michi Saito said:
She is very open with her close friends, but it is hard for her to get to the point where she is open towards people. She can be slightly shy towards people emotionally. Most of the time she is a very talkative, as long as it has nothing to do with her.
It might just be me, but "She can be slightly shy towards people emotionally." and "Most of the time she is very talkative, as long as it has nothing to do with her." seem to clash.
Is she shy? Or is she just modest?
My friend is modest -- He likes to talk, but when people talk about him or compliment him, he tries to change the subject.
My friend is shy -- It's hard to get her to talk about
anything.
I think your History needs a little more meat to it, as well. It seems sort of bare-bones to me.
Also, run her history and personality through a spell checker.
Other than that, well done, and welcome to SARP.