[ ✔ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
Did a quick edit to your OP to show something real quick. Next time you post one of these things, open the full editor to get the entire list of options and fill out anything you need. Other than that, it looks good.
[ ✔ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
Couldn't actually find a template for currencies, as it's included in the Faction template. However, I see you've followed the example of the NDC and other factions before them.
[ ✔ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
Formatting's nice, I enjoy the placement of tables, and the pacing of the article.
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] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
Here's where it doesn't really work. I note you have a lot of incomplete sentances in your writing, even in JP with me. While this can be used as a pacing tool, it does nothing to add to this article. In stead, it makes reading of it jarring and seem more cliff notes or napkin scribbles than real article.
[ ✔ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
Links to every other major faction's currency, well done! Nice touch!
[ ✔ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
I've found currencies, exchanges, and rates, to be a fun tool to explore an alien nation in RP. This fits rather nicely as that one really small economy with the super deflated currency that looks cheap, but isn't really.
[ ✔ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
Not applicable
[ ✔ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
Probably used another article to get the basic structure, but it's full of original information and I can't tell where the format came from.
[ ✔ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
Currency. Not worried about it.
[ ✔ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Not applicable.
Could you run this by a few buddies to find ways to flesh out your sentance structure and language?
Also, the article switches at points from almost directly addressing the reader to a bland statement of what it is. An English teacher back in my middle school years liked to talk about something called "voice" in writing. Basically, the perspective of the narrator, and the personality of them, as though they were a character in of themselves. How do you want this article to sound, if read aloud to you?
Let me know if you have questions, comments, or concerns on my review.